Great work, Vijil! However, I think a _solid_ Kadesh "feel" has been lost in translation. I'm basing my opinion on two very visible portions of the ship: the central forward section, and the port (and I suppose starboard, as well) tail extensions. The central forward section, though quite sleek, is recessed, whereas Kadeshi ships typically have a mostly protruding snout. While the top tail extension screams of Kadeshi influence, the port and starboard ones detract from this. However, if it is just my mistake of aspect, and this is not a side protrusion, but a lower tail extension directly opposite the top extension, then it does work as Kadeshi. Other than that, I commend you on the rest of the ship which carries itself as true Kadeshi, namely the plating and bulbous protrusions. I would also like to make note the trio of circles; simply that I see them, and think of Sajuuk.
This is very, very good. Its greatly drawn, the perspective is excellent and the cool pannels are done well. Il definetly have to use this as an example to improve my own drawings.
I really like your style as is, and your integration with other styles seems to be going well. I also really like the open negative space, it makes it really easy for me to fit these onto my desktop.
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